longest running fringe festival in the US;

Mission statement - you might want to strengthen it or update it

Diversity lottery - very cool opportunity for artists; partnership with Quest - private perfs. for persons with disabilities

excellent timeline; $2.8 economin impact

All ticket sales given to artists.   tickets range from $5 - $12  $425,000 paid to artists last fiscal

Accessibility - excellent

Evaluation - maybe include results from evaluation; data

I had some problems with the budgets; the operating budget for adm. salaries is $244,269, but the project budget is $280,125?  Why is the project budget higher than the org budget?  Doesn't make sense to me;  Also, org budget for travel is $12,300 but the proposal budget is $15,000; venue rental is $138,150 for project, but org is $102,000

Would have liked to see a sample of the shows and/or artists from past years

• A well-written grant. 
• Thank you for presenting clear, concise goals with measurable objectives.
• Excellent Strategy: OF continues to focus on increasing attendance from patrons outside of Central Florida. As part of that effort, 50% of the performance schedule is reserved for local groups. The other 50% is split evenly between national and international artists. With comprehensive marketing and strategic plans in place, non-local visitors are estimated to increase by 3% over the next two years.
• Explain Artists Application Revenue. What is that policy with artists?
• Cash marketing expenses ($72,100) are extremely low, countered with exceptional in-kind ($100,000).
• Budgets balance-to-the-penny each year - EACH of the past five consecutive years has ended with a "strategic reserve of $33,478." These reserves go into a reserve fund. Are there endowment plans in place for portions of reserves, or is the existing reserve fund in essence an unrestricted endowment?
• Nice to see accessibility addressed within the marketing materials (e.g., publications). How is ADA symbol usage (highly recommended by the State) employed within marketing materials (e.g., website, print, etc.)? 

Mission is a little confusing but gets the point across. I like how you presented your goals and objectives.

Amazing impact numbers - fantastic attendance!

Nice inclusion of "financial accessibility"